…where YOU DECIDE what you think is good, bad, or otherwise writing. This was the excerpt you were asked to critique:
“Every right decision brings us blessings. Every wrong decision brings us pain. And then, when times get hard, our struggle and our pain shows on our faces and our bodies. When people see our pain and weakness in our face, they say, ‘She used to be fine, she used to be this, she used to be that.’ When men feel our beauty has faded we become shocked at how well they ignore us and forget us. We’ll do anything to get their attention, money, love. Can I suck your dick? Can I do anything, can I, can I?”
66% of you (245 votes) thought it was Really Good; 18% (66 votes) thought it was Excellent!!!; 14% (50 votes) thought Meh, it was okay; 2% (7 votes) felt it was Really Shitty; and the piece apparently made 1 person’s eyes bleed.
As for the excerpt itself, it is from the much-loved, now-classic work that launched the avalanche of street fiction you’ve seen in the past eight years since its original publication. The book is…
I absolutely love this novel. It’s good to see most people (at least, the ones who participated) agree.
Be on the lookout for another installment of Really Good Or Really Shitty!!! tomorrow!!!